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    文章摘要:還有的同學長大后想成為教師,像園丁一樣用知識澆灌著含苞待放的幼苗,為國家培育出更多杰出的人才......大家心中的理想都各有不同,我,長大就想成為一名優秀的歌手?”同桌紀肥念著昨天他從網上收集關于“種族歧視”的資料,用一種奇怪的眼神看著我,說:“我們班呢,就有這樣的一個典型的例子。

    • 年級:高中高三
    • 字數:1500字作文
    • 體裁
    • 作者:啊咧咧

    傳說過去有個帽店學徒叫張大頂,學徒期滿后決定自己開辦一個帽店,他意識到要招徠顧客,就得有一塊醒目的招牌,于是自己設計了一個草樣,上面寫著“張大頂帽店,制作和現金出售各式禮帽。”還畫了一頂禮帽附在下面。

    帽店開張時,一塊招牌掛在門前,招牌下方一個新穎的禮帽圖樣與上面“張大頂”三個大字渾然一體,十分醒目,來往顧客無不稱贊這個招牌做得好。 這個修改招牌的有趣的傳說,給我們一個重要的啟示,修改能夠刪掉差的,糾正不妥當的,把重點突出出來,使好的更鮮明。寫文章,也是同樣的道理,修改才能寫出好的文章來。’ 有的同學認為,寫作文是我們的事,修改是老師的事。.所以每次寫完作文給老師留下不少作業。生字不會寫,空著格,讓老師填空;自己把握不準的詞也照樣用上,讓老師看著辦。修改是作文的一個重要環節,也是提高作文質量、作文能力的重要步驟和基本功。如果寫完文章能發現自己文中的毛病,并能糾正,就會使自己的作文水平更快提高。修修改改,就會逐步懂得文章應該怎樣寫。能修改一篇作文,要比盲目地寫兒篇收益更大。

    一篇好文章是寫出來的,也是改出來的。魯迅的小說《肥皂》不過七千字,競修改了一百四五十處! 應該怎樣修改文章呢? 寫完文章后首先要仔細地看一看或輕聲讀一讀,從中發現問題或毛病。 第一,檢查一文,內容是否切題。 這一步是再考慮一下,文章的中心是否明確,選擇的材料是否能突出中心。由于作文之前缺乏周密的考慮,拿起筆,就順著個思路寫下去,寫完之后,再一看發現“跑題”了的現象是有的。如,文題是《記一次考試》,可是有的同學檢查時發現,文中大量篇幅在寫考試之后,碰到這種情況,要做大的改動,要重新考慮選材、組織材料。當然,我們還是要把功夫放在寫作之前,盡量避免這種大動大改或“重打鼓、另開張”的現象。 第二,檢查文章的層次是否分明。 初學寫作的同學容易犯“穿大褂”的毛病,寫著寫著就忘了分段,一下通到底了;或許還有兩個段落安排的順序顛倒了等現象。所以修改文章時,要看看前后是否連貫,文章的層次是否清楚,分段是否得當。如發現問題,可做適當的調整。

      修改出好文作文1500字作者:高中高三學生(3)班 啊咧咧

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